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Black Sun

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Literature Text

black sun don't forget to shine
shine in my life (black out my sight)
light the bright places with shadows
and make everything wrong tonight

oh black sun shine on me just right
show me the wrong paths to take
let me dance in your shadows (dance in your shadows)
and all the blackness that you make
let me sing your screaming song
that never stops whispering in my mind (never stops whispering)
about all the rights that you forsake
(forsake me, forsake me, please black sun forsake me)

black sun don't forget to shine (don't forget to shine)
shine in my life (black out my sight)
light the bright places with shadows
and make everything wrong tonight (make everything wrong tonight)

Black sun bring me lack luster dreams
dreams that haunt my sleep (haunt my sleep)
and only chaos do you bring
chaos that rips me at the seams
your black rays only tear at my mind (tear at my mind)
every thing you give I can never keep
the black sun brings me dreams that make me scream
(scream for that black sun to set, scream scream scream)

black sun don't forget to shine (don't forget to shine)
shine in my life (black out my sight)
light the bright places with shadows
and make everything wrong tonight
(make everything wrong
everything wrong
everything wrong
everything wrong tonight)
okay so I'm half way done with this song. but im a little stuck. im still working on it so THIS IS A WORK IN PROGRESS! but tell me what you think of it so far!
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TheseKrimzonFlames's avatar
I love the words. :nod:
It has a very angsty feel, which I also like.

If you dont mind, Ima save this and tease it ina bit when I get done with my inbox. :)